Steel Rimmed Glasses - a poem.

So this is a poem about Keith Bennett, the fourth victim of Ian Brady and Myra Hindley, whose body has never been found.

You'll find more information about him and the other murders here.

The first verse is set just after Keith was dumped on the moor, and the surrounding nature is seeking to comfort him.

The second verse it about Keith's body resigning itself to the moors due to a loss of hope of ever being discovered.

So, tell me what you think....

Steel Rimmed Glasses

You found a hillock for a pillow

When they said they couldn’t find you,

And in the marsh laid down to rest

let the heath land slowly claim you.

Purple moor grass bent,

in murmured conspiracy.

The stagnant ponds and flushes

Seep underneath your chamber,

the tenderfooted bracken

weaves your comfort blanket.

The lichen covered boulders

form a mossy, cryptic cairn.

The rushes whisper in the wind

that they know where to find you.

You slowly sank into the earth

and shed your doughy flesh,

the perfect dome of your skull

holds your spotless, milky teeth.

The crowberry weaves its roots

into the hollows of your ribs.

Peat resides inside your head

fell through socket hollows

You came apart piece by piece

Mineral by mineral.

Your bones, bleached and brittle

are the only clue of you,

aside from steel rimmed glasses

which lie broken on your chest.

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Sleepy pictures.

Here's some pictures of Barney sleeping/looking cute. Too nice not to share!

 

Awww.

PS I'll put a poem up tomorrow, it's about a dead body. Yay!

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Prof. Barnabus von Chocolate - video debut.

Well guys, look at what we have achieved:

He's like a finely tuned obedience machine! Check him out!

And, when he's in the trees, copse, grove, thicket or woody hollow, he even comes out intermittently to check if I'm still there. Awesome.

The only problem is he runs in one bit and then reappears somewhere completely different. A few times, I've been stood there waiting for him and he comes bounding out of the bushes in a completely different area. I think he gets onto a scent trail and goes nuts.

A cyclist was laughing at me as Prof. Barnabus had run through the fence to go for a drink/quick dip in the river, and I was calling and calling him and then I heard him bark, and he was right behind me. He'd found a different hole in the fence to come back through. Tricksy hobbit.

He looks so stoked when he's running around hunting for squirrels, total blissed out expression on his face. Amazing.

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Operation Australia

Today is Friday (day off!) and on Sunday, my Mum and Mike left for a month long trip to Australia. Which leaves me and the Professor alone - for a whole month...

If I'm going to be honest, the operation did not start well. In an effort to alleviate the stress, I moved my laptop and all my books downstairs so Barnabus has some company. I have now completely taken over the kitchen table with all my texts, save for the space left for the massive chocolate egg which I have to 'share with the others'. At this point, Barney had not come out of his bed.

So, Sunday night and first walk time. I had to reach into his dog-cave, as he pressed himself up against the back wall, and attach his harness while he was in there. Once attached, he came out willingly, but eyed my over his shoulder the entire walk as if to say 'she is STILL following me.'

I did try and take him out into the sunshine as I was making poetry notes in the garden, but as you can see below, Barney was not in the mood for socialising.

Not in the mood at all.

The week seemed to continue this way, until on Tuesday night we had a break through. I went to his bed (where he has taken up permanent residence), and showed him his harness and he jumped right out! Amazing!

So, yesterday I think - 'this is it, he is finally used to me' and after a few experimental, but successful, 'Barney come here!''s I decided to let him off the lead. It initially went well; he ran off, I called him, he came back, I gave him a treat, he ran off, I called him etc but then, he ran off.

Like, properly ran off until he was just a brown blur with a little white bum bouncing around in the distance. I called and called, but he would not come. Off he went, into the bushes, out of the bushes, into the river, under the trees.

'Great' I thought 'half an hour before I have to leave before work and Barney has done a runner'

And it was then I heard the train. I was instantly reminded of the fact that two dogs had been run over on the tracks just recently and was convinced that Barney was careering towards the same fate. My heart began pounding and I felt panicky under my sweltering hot, gigantic winter coat.

And then, he appeared. Looking rather sheepish I might add. I put on my best 'come hither' expression and called him over, handing out a treat.

And over he came.

I clipped the lead on his harness and went to stroke his head but he jumped away, cowering.

It was a stark reminder of the treatment Barney might have suffered at the hands of his previous owners.

So, today I didn't let Barney off the lead. He was calm with the other dogs, let some little kids stroke him and even posed for a few photos:

And then, disaster. Literally seconds after these pictures were taken, two labradors came running over growling and bowled Barney off his feet. He was understandably upset and tried to run off at full pelt, but when the lead reached its maximum he was flung up into the air.

The owners apologised but Barney was terrified. I caught up with him and his heckles were up, his pupils huge and he kept trying to escape. I stroked him for a bit and calmed him down but on the way back, he kept hiding behind me at the approach of any other dogs.

It's a shame that the walk ended that way, just when we were making progress in his confidence.

He's out in the garden now, mulling it over in the sun with his peanut-butter-filled Kong.

Poor pooch.

x

A p.o.e.m

This is a poem about how much Barney hates me:

The Notebook

My dog has a secret notebook,

which he hides in his bed,

inside he writes of many things,

Such as river dips and walks,

And lady dogs and cats,

And circumventing squirrels.

Anything like that.

I’ve never seen his notebook

But I know he writes

in it when nobody is looking.

Page upon page upon page

Of amusing anecdotes

And canine ruminations

In scratchy print.

I often feel him staring at me,

But when I look

he turns his head as if he wasn’t,

He’s thinking what to write

About me his in pad,

Scrawling my name

Over and over.

One time I tried to find it,

But he’d hidden it well.

And when he came back from the garden,

He eyed me suspiciously.

He hasn’t trusted me since.

Unreliable narrator..

So, this piece is written from first person perspective in a journal form. The man is supposed to be an unreliable narrator:

'An unreliable narrator is a first-person narrator that for some reason has a compromised point-of-view. In all stories with a first-person narrator, the narrator serves as a filter for the events. What the narrator does not know or observe cannot be explained to the reader. Usually, however, the reader trusts that the narrator is knowledgeable and truthful enough to give them an accurate representation of the story. In the case of an unreliable narrator (sometimes called a fallible narrator), the reader has reason not to trust what the narrator is saying.'

So basically, he's got the wrong end of the stick and he is the only one who doesn't realise...

Underneath

Tuesday 6^th September 2011

Dear Diary,

Well, I must start by saying that today has been glorious! The skies have been blue all afternoon and the sunrise this morning was breathtaking, the heavens were aflame with ochres, violets and vermilions. In fact, it was so warm my Riesling and I were even able to sit out in the garden right up until dusk, and all in a short sleeved shirt! I really would not rather be anywhere else than this little village at this splendid time of year.

And I am not ashamed to tell you, my dear diary, that today I feel truly blessed.

We woke up at 5:30am (as usual) and took our breakfast on the terrace. True to form, Gatsby was after mine once he had finished his, but I recalled what the vet had said and resisted, even with his big, brown, pleading eyes fixed on me as they were. That reminds me, I must remember to order some more of his heart tablets – I shall do that in the morning.

So, after that we took our morning stroll down the garden and into the woods, towards the reservoir. The chaffinches were out in force and their music was beautiful, and lo and behold, we even had the luck to spot a doe and her young fawn not 30 yards away.  We watched them for what must have been a whole minute before they caught wind of us and darted off. The early morning sunlight streamed through the trees magnificently and the air felt so fresh.

We were just coming up towards the reservoir when Gatsby caught a scent and ran off, I could hear him barking so followed him into a leafy hollow. And imagine my surprise, dear diary, when I saw that there stood two young men, neither of which I had ever laid eyes on before! They were trying hush Gatsby but he was so proud of his nose and was showing off about it! Rather loudly, I might add.

I called out a greeting as I approached and they both seemed very surprised to see me, probably impressed that a man of my advanced years should be so deep in the woods, so very early in the morning.  And to tell you the truth, they both looked very upset and agitated.  I could put their red faces down to the recent exertion of refilling the large rectangular hole which lay at their feet, but there seemed to be an air of turmoil about them which I could not quite put my finger on.

It wasn’t until I enquired of the nature of their outing that the answer became clear; their very, very dear dog had passed away in the night and they were laying him there to rest. I consoled them by remarking that they couldn’t have chosen a better spot for a final resting place and that Butch (as I later learned the dogs name to be) would be very happy there. I told them about how sad I was when Gatsby’s dear mother has passed and that time really is the best healer. I asked what breed of dog Butch was, as the hole was so large, and they said he was an Alsatian. I said that Alsatians were among the noblest of dogs.

The dear fellows looked at their wits end and seemed very uncomfortable, so I offered to say a few words in remembrance of Butch, which I did, rather spectacularly I might add. They both seemed very moved by my words, and shared more than a few assuring glances with each other during my ad-lib eulogy. I closed with a passage from Corinthians, which I think they did not recognise, but still, my intentions were clear.

In the ensuing moments of respectful silence, I picked a few marigolds and laid them on the freshly tilled earth where I imagined Butch’s head to be. The two men, overcome with emotion, left straight afterwards, carrying their spades over their shoulders. However, it wasn’t until they were out of sight that I realised I hadn’t caught either of their names.  A shame really, it’s not often you encounter men who wear their hearts on their sleeves quite so honourably as those two. It was refreshing to see two youths so in touch with their emotions, they did indeed seem like fine young fellows.

Well, after that curious event, we spent the rest of the afternoon painting and I must say, I managed to capture the highlights on Mrs Eagleton-Hedgley’s face rather splendidly.  We then took in some Brahms in the sun room before a supper of tenderloin with a chanterelle sauté, and finished off with the aforementioned sunset Riesling.

And then, as always, off to bed at 9:00pm on the dot with a nip of port for me and a saucer of cloves and milk for Gatsby.

And to you, my dear diary, I bid goodnight.

LHD

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Date: 08.09.11

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Hey Jill, r u ok? Y didnt u turn up last night? I went 2 the house this morn but Mark said u were out and he hasn’t seen u. Where r u? Txt me x

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Im starting to worry. Where r u? Mark said u r not at the house. Y wont u answer ur phone? Pls txt bak. Xxxxxx

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Jill, ring me! Where r u? I just want 2 no u r ok! Mark wont speak 2 me. Has he done it again? X

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Jill! Pls ring me! I am worried! U can stay at mine. Pls pls ring me. X

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'Sick'

So, Creative Writing assessment time has rolled around again and I've decided to be more technically adventurous! I ended up writing two pieces, both of which I'll post up here.


For the piece below, I used third person objective perspective, defined by some random on Yahoo! answers as:


'Third person, is when a story is told by a narrator not involved in the story itself.

Objective third person means the narrator only knows what someone watching would know (so they don't know people's thoughts, but rather actions and words)'


So basically, everything needs to be shown through the characters dialogue and external actions, no inner thought.


Ernest Hemingway was pretty much the dude at this, he described his technique as like an iceberg, ie. only a small part of the story is showing meaning that most of it is hidden:

See what you think...

Sick

“I look sick, do you think I look sick?”

“No, I don’t think you look sick. Why?”

“No reason. Maybe it’s the light in here.”

“Yes dear, maybe.”

She plunged her hands back into the scalding water and groped for the scourer.

“Darling?”

“Yes dear?”

“I was thinking maybe we could take a trip soon, you know, just us. Maybe go to the coast.”

“Yes, maybe.”

“Because my sister said she could have the kids and it’d be nice to have some time for just the two of us. You’ve been working such long hours recently.”

“Uh-huh.” He closed his newspaper momentarily, opening it on the next page.

“Yes, I think that would be nice.” She resumed scrubbing.

“Simon got an A in his maths test, did he tell you?”

“No, he didn’t.”

“Good isn’t it? I was never any good at numbers, he must get that from your side.”

“Yes, he must do.”

The water in the bowl was hot enough already, but she added more. Underneath the marigolds her hands were scarlet.

“I was thinking of getting my hair cut short, what do you think?”

“What?”

“My hair, cut short. Do you think it would look nice?”

“Why would you do that?”

“Oh I don’t know, I just fancy a change, freshen myself up a bit. I thought maybe I could get it done like that newsreader you like, what’s her name?”

He let out an exasperated sigh, “I don’t know who you mean, dear.”

“Of course you do, she’s on at 6 o’clock. She’s got glasses, and short brown hair. In her early 30s.”

“Oh yes, I know.”

“Do you think it would suit me? Make me look younger maybe?”

He glanced at her over the top of his reading glasses, “If you want to then do it, but I think your hair is fine as it is.” He went back to his newspaper.

She looked at her reflection in the window in front of her and flicked her head back to hide the lengths of her hair behind her shoulders. The overhead light wasn’t particularly flattering, it pooled on her cheekbones exaggerating the dark circles under her eyes and spotlighted her sagging jowls. She used to have beautiful skin, he used to tell her that all the time, he used to call her ‘luminous’.  It was hard to connect that girl with the middle aged woman who stared back at her from the onyx garden.

She lifted the oven dish out of the bowl and scrutinised it. It sparkled under the overhead lights but if she ran her fingers along the walls she could feel little bumps along the burn line. She pushed it back under the water and resumed rubbing.

She paused.

“Did I tell you?” she said “I saw Hamish on Monday.”

“Oh, yes?” he looked up suddenly, “Did you speak to him?”

“Just briefly, he was in a rush somewhere. Him and Heather are getting a divorce, did you know that?”

“I don’t think so, no. Well, maybe. There are so many rumours flying around the office you don’t know what to believe.”

“I suppose so.”

She inspected the dish again, it still looked greasy. Her arms were aching even though she kept transferring the sponge from one hand to the other. It may look clean but it was important to get all the bits off, if you didn’t get them off properly then they would build up gradually over time and the dish would be ruined.  

“It’s a shame really. I wonder what will happen to the kids, they’re so young”

“It’s not really any of our business.”

“No, I suppose not.” She turned over the dish and began scrubbing the bottom.

“Did you notice I’m wearing the earrings? The ones you bought me on our honeymoon.”

He glanced up “Yes, very pretty.”

“You used to say they made me look beautiful. You said you liked seeing me in them and nothing else. Do you remember?”

“That was a very long time ago.”

“Yes, I suppose it was.”

She turned on the tap and turned the dish beneath it. The suds parted as a curtain revealing the pristine glass beneath. Holding it in both hands she took a moment to view herself in it, her reflection appeared both radiant and distorted under the harsh kitchen lights. She rotated her body as if to place the dish on the drying rack, but then continued a little further. She looked at her husband not looking at her, before letting it tumble to the floor.

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